As it goes my shooting locations will be: My bedroom, Outside between my door and the school, the sleaze and slime cafe, "smoker's pad," and either a classroom in the school or the studio above Metz.
So I've finally got my story almost all down, and I decided to just break it down simply:
Scene 1: my bedroom
1. Shot of a bed with person asleep pans down the length and stops on messenger bag sitting at the foot of the bed.
2. Ring! Alarms goes off and cuts to Kevin jerking awake.
3. Quick montage of morning activities: shower, clothes, cereal.
4. Back to shot of bag at the foot of bed, and Kevin runs in and grabs it.
Scene 2: Outside
5. Cuts to Kevin walking outside. (to school)
6. Kevin opening a door, and walking inside.
Scene 3: In the sleaze
7. Kevin walks in the sleaze and sits down.
8. Sets bag down next to him.
9. Opens it, and pulls out sketchbook.
- Transitions -
10.*Montage of shots of Kevin pulling thing out of bag through the day*
11. Shot of bag after Kevin closes it, then shows hand placing it down.
- Transition -
Scene 4: bedroom
Zooms out and its back at the foot of the bed where it started.
1. The bag is at the foot of the bed and kevin is a sleep again.
2. Ring! the shot holds, but Kevin is heard getting up. Same sounds from last wake up "sequence" but the images holds on the bag.
3. After a beat of silence, the bag wiggles by itself.
4. Kevin runs in the room grabs the back, and runs on his way.
Scene 5: Outside/Sleaze
1. maybe a shot of kevin walking outside.
2. Kevin walks into the sleaze and stands in line.
3. Someone passes by him with a drink, and a hand come out of his bag and knocks it out of that person's hands.
4. That person is furious and argues with Kevin.
5. Kevin walks away, not knowing what happened.
Scene 6: Smoker's pad
1. Kevin walks outside to the smoker's pad, and someone approaches him.
2. "Hey do you have a light?" "Yeah, sure." Kevin rummages in his bag and finds the a ligher.
3. As Kevin hands the smoker a ligher, the hand once again comes out of the bag. This time the hand flips off the smoker.
4. Looking down at the hand then back up at Kevin, the smoker raises and eyebrow and backs away.
*a beat*
5. He slowly comes back in, lights his cigarette only to back out again.
6. Kevin turns around to leave.
7. As he passes someone the hand comes out and slaps their ass.
8. *Montage of shots of the hand doing mean things to people*
- Pulling hair, stealing a wallet, poking shoulders, etc.
Scene 7: studio or classroom
8. Downtrodden, Kevin plops down on a table, unable to figure out what's going on today
9. As he remembers everyone getting mad at him, he tears up a little.
10. The hand comes out of the bag and hands him a tissue.
"Oh thank you..."
*wait a beat*
"Oh, what the hell!"
11. Kevin freaks out and throws the bag across the room.
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